Thursday, December 29, 2011

GLPS1

It had been 6days since I arrived at this camp.
I became friendly with my room and classmates.
I'm in the highst class in my room, but I knew I wasn't good at english that much after seeing my classmtaes.
They were older than me and their English skills were increadeble.
Our pop song contest's song is dynamite.
I wish I do good in my class.

1 comment:

  1. Welcome to GLPS Jeff! I hope to see more writing here, as this isn't very much so far.

    Here are some things to fix in the above post:

    It (HAS) been 6(SPACE)days since I arrived at this camp.
    I became friendly with my room and classmates.
    I'm in the (HIGHEST) class in my room, but I knew I wasn't good at (E)nglish that much after seeing my (CLASSMATES).
    They (ARE) older than me and their English skills (ARE) (INCREDIBLE).
    Our pop song contest's song is ("DYNAMITE").
    I (HOPE) I (WILL) do good in my class.

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